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Lovely piece, I like the flow of it, lovely flowing lines.
You need focuss, what shall it be?
The focusses are points in the drawing where the detail is the most extreme "also called Focal points, I may be using this term wrong idk", but the idea remains relativly the same.
They are areas in your piece that you want the most detailed and the most contrasting , to "pop" out from the piece and be the attention grabber.
The dragon fly,
Skull,
Cheeks,
Lips,
Would be the areas I would make focal points out of to bring "flow" to the piece and make it stand out.
I would shade these areas accordingly and add details like;
Dragonfly, Make it darker and give more intricate details making the Body "head area" pop out.
Skull, Just a light touchup on the "shadows" will make this good. Crisp up the lines.
Cheeks, if this is "walking dead" sink them in a bit using shading with very subtle hints.
Lips, They are usually the focus of a woman's face and give the personality of that woman. FOr this it needs a special detail that only you can define.
Though there is some mess ups;
The neckline from jaw line needs some sort of reangling.
The nose needs to be more "brought out" it looks completly flat currently
The eyes are missing "tear ducts" next to the ends pointing twords the nose, this would be EXtremly subtly drawn in though, very very light stroke.
The strengths most certainly is the hair.
The dead eyes.
The vampira "it's an old picture", style hair curle
The striking pose.
A decent picture overall.